Topic: How does one become a poet?
+Catherine !ttGirlsPl2 — 6.5 years ago #54,826
I feel like I can write poetry
This could get society to notice me
I may not be good today
But if tomorrow doesn't lead me astray
I could become better
And envoke pleasure
through mere words alone
All I need is guidance to help me grow
+Morbid !vbsvhaneDY — 6.5 years ago, 2 minutes later[T] [B] #578,321
Just write stupid shit
+Syntax — 6.5 years ago, 5 hours later, 5 hours after the original post[T] [B] #578,325
The Strange And Special Net
A Poem by Syntax
Whose net is that? I think I know.
Its owner is quite angry though.
She was cross like a dark potato.
I watch her pace. I cry hello.
She gives her net a shake,
And screams I've made a bad mistake.
The only other sound's the break,
Of distant waves and birds awake.
The net is strange, special and deep,
But she has promises to keep,
Tormented with nightmares she never sleeps.
Revenge is a promise a girl should keep.
She rises from her cursed bed,
With thoughts of violence in her head,
A flash of rage and she sees red.
Without a pause I turned and fled.
·Catherine !ttGirlsPl2 (OP) — 6.5 years ago, 6 hours later, 12 hours after the original post[T] [B] #578,342
@previous (Syntax)
That's actually really good.
·Syntax — 6.5 years ago, 2 hours later, 14 hours after the original post[T] [B] #578,345
@previous (Catherine !ttGirlsPl2)
You wood be totally completely shocked and amazed as to how I created that Poem.
So like I looked in my mail and none from your next of the woods. I get mail from Rocket Man out your way asking for money yet You no deliver
I will work on another poem later - Surf is beyond FANTASTIC so it's taking much of my time currently
·Catherine !ttGirlsPl2 (OP) — 6.5 years ago, 15 minutes later, 14 hours after the original post[T] [B] #578,346
Wait a minute... you were talking about me and that router situation months back. Wtf?
+Anonymous D — 6.5 years ago, 24 minutes later, 15 hours after the original post[T] [B] #578,349
@578,345 (Syntax)
Illegible gibberish.
+ducky !MwWb.dJjRc — 6.5 years ago, 12 hours later, 1 day after the original post[T] [B] #578,375
I thought you were leaving for good.
·Syntax — 6.5 years ago, 28 minutes later, 1 day after the original post[T] [B] #578,376
@578,346 (Catherine !ttGirlsPl2)
Router that is ancient history -
No email concerns something very recent
Current history is I spent almost 9 Hours this AM to PM Surfing my Ocean a Blue and Crashed in2 some rocks and hurt a very small yet not the smallest toe and I suspect I broke it as a fuck. Could only dance for two hours 2nite
Did get caught up on email with many - And then a really nice dance gal felt sorry for me and came over to make caramel popcorn and watch a movie - She chose a chick flick which was really nice. If only I was 1/3 my age I wood have made a move on this friend but alas the snuggles were nice - Chilly weather does have some advantages.
So Poem #2 is not so much so good but here goes
Dancing
Free verse by Syntax
Because I could not eliminate for Dancing,
it did kindly eliminate for me.
Dancing, Dancing, every where,
Yet my little toe drove me to eliminate.
I cannot help but stop and look at the exotic Jitterbug.
Never forget the strange and foreign tango.
Dipping her deep and deeper, however hard it tries,
Will always be furious.
Now raging is just the thing,
To get me wondering if the music is savage.
When I think of the twists and turns, I see folk cries.
Now how to end this poem means a twist and turn at end..
·Syntax — 6.5 years ago, 1 hour later, 1 day after the original post[T] [B] #578,382
@578,346 (Catherine !ttGirlsPl2)
> Wait a minute... you were talking about me and that router situation months back. Wtf?
Not at all related to router not even close
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