1. Long drawn out rhymes is so '99, we're in the '19 and people don't want to listen to that stuff. Truncate the rhymes and use commas.
2. Delivery is important and spittin' your rhymes like an exasperated immortal technique is wack.
3. Rhyme about your locale, generic horror core raps written for teenagers will not get you the racks' you deserve. There's ton of white dudes doing the whole edgy psuedo-eminem schtick; it's not a path that will lead you anywhere. how many Barrie dudes are even rapping? I would rather listen to barrie street antics than "Bank Robbery"(Though, that's one of your best produced songs and delivery is good. The person who mastered it did a bang up job. )
4. Learn about a bridge, chorus and hook.
5. You got to be more social and try to jump on trends. One of those trends is doing a remix of a poppin' song but putting your own twist to it. This song for example but remake it as " Barrie Legends ".
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AC-96dZ1n9k&list=RDAC-96dZ1n9kEco sucks ass at every venture he pursues. He's also a terrible human being, so he should either lock himself up from society or end it all.
@OP
Eco needs to fucking kill himself. Why are you encouraging this fucking drug addicted piece of shit OP? You should only encourage him to end his own life. That would be best for everyone, including Eco.