Topic: I wrote another short scene or excerpt of a story.

+Catherine !TGirlYJKXM — 12.3 years ago #34,741

I know, I'm a terrible writer and should probably just stop.

The Travelling Knight
http://pastebin.com/wycctuVw

+Anonymous B — 12.3 years ago, 2 minutes later[T] [B] #396,040

tl;dr

Does it come in readers digest version?

+Editor — 12.3 years ago, 17 minutes later, 20 minutes after the original post[T] [B] #396,042

The Battle of that great day of travelling knight, will terminate the most blatant movement of all in the impious career of the fair maiden.
On the other side, the knight fell high from the sky. He landed flat on the hard surface beneath him, landing on the fair maiden.

Astonished that he was still alive, he got up on all fours as he looked around at his surroundings. After he has thrown off the mask.
He then rips open the back of her gown, leaving her partially naked from the waist ... and might just make it out of her situation alive, respectfully calling her "Lady ...

·Catherine !TGirlYJKXM (OP) — 12.3 years ago, 19 minutes later, 39 minutes after the original post[T] [B] #396,046

@previous (Editor )
Yeah, I know I'm shit, why rub it in?

·Editor — 12.3 years ago, 33 minutes later, 1 hour after the original post[T] [B] #396,051

@previous (Catherine !TGirlYJKXM)
Not shit. Just spicing it up for you. You cannot have a story with a Knight in it, without a fair maiden.

+ducky !MwWb.dJjRc — 12.3 years ago, 1 hour later, 2 hours after the original post[T] [B] #396,066

Slightly too manys comas

·Catherine !TGirlYJKXM (OP) — 12.3 years ago, 15 minutes later, 2 hours after the original post[T] [B] #396,069

@previous (ducky !MwWb.dJjRc)
Yeah, I need to work on my comma habit.
The beginning I tried writing it like the bible.

+Anonymous E — 12.3 years ago, 19 minutes later, 2 hours after the original post[T] [B] #396,071

@previous (Catherine !TGirlYJKXM)

> The beginning I tried writing it like the bible.

Yeah, but I don't think it'll be as epic though.

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