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Topic: I want to describe a punch I landed on someone today

+Anonymous A13.4 years ago #22,512

I was riled up, my blood was angry and the red mist descended. Before I knew what was happening, I had begun my swing, a huge round-house hay-maker of a punch. My fist seemed to begin from Milwaukee. It gained speed right around Idaho. I heard it pass my own face, that whooshing sound that a jet engine makes. I zoned in on my target and the punch landed, square on the underside of the jaw. I heard the bones dislocate, saw the shock and agony in the eyes as the lower teeth crumbled and the jaw-bone gave way. I heard - actually heard - the brain smash against the back of the skull. Almost in slow motion, she dropped to the ground, unconscious, my poorly-ironed shirt - the reason for my anger - still in her hand.

That was 3 hours ago. I left her there and went to the pub from where I now write.

+Autphag !fvna3QzWVM13.4 years ago, 2 minutes later[T] [B] #270,026

Creativity Movement 3.jpgCool story.

+Anonymous C13.4 years ago, 51 seconds later, 3 minutes after the original post[T] [B] #270,027

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You seem pleased.

+Anonymous D13.4 years ago, 5 hours later, 5 hours after the original post[T] [B] #270,133

Beating your wife again, Dave? You're a monster.

+Anonymous E13.4 years ago, 22 hours later, 1 day after the original post[T] [B] #270,475

did not happen..

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